I have about ten minutes today before I go out visiting, and a wee one banging a biscuit tin on my foot, so I’m going to have to veer away from the prompt. I’ll just use the word ‘slant’ as title and look at that wonderful photo:
Slant
Please treat me kindly
today, show me your hidden
heart, one rich with blood.
Mp. Not very happy with that. If I find more time later, I’ll try again. Or rewrite it on the car journey …
2 comments:
See, this is why I wasn't tempted.
Not because of your poem, of course, which I'm reading as pleasantly creepy :)
The biscuit tin/in the car thing.
wv: pigho!
Definitely enjoyed this one. I have a thing for short poems.
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