Here's what we got from the chain renga yesterday. I loved the process of doing this, a bit frightening but fascinating to see it unfurl. We managed 26 verses, pretty good for an international spread of writers. (We had two verse 25s, so I made an arbitrary decision and used the one that was numbered:)
Jasmine Revolution
They stand, basking in
The sunlight ‘midst the winter
Of their discontent
The bud furled tight, when prodded,
must open to the spring time.
must open to the spring time.
Cold moving storms
Heading east
Dissipate precipitously
Heading east
Dissipate precipitously
Mud clings to boots, leaves footprints
we can’t control our dreams
we can’t control our dreams
muddy footprints blur
against the slated path’s shine
smoothing until gone
against the slated path’s shine
smoothing until gone
dandelions, daffodils
vying for my attention
vying for my attention
The petals chatter
whirling beating on the wind
the birds perch nearby
whirling beating on the wind
the birds perch nearby
Giddy with the warmth of sun,
dappled shadows play with leaves.
dappled shadows play with leaves.
Between wingtips buzz
a clouds of gnats dances high
scattering shadow
a clouds of gnats dances high
scattering shadow
my face clouds with remembrance
warm Spring days almost now past
warm Spring days almost now past
Spike-edged leaves picked for salads –
this sharp spring wonder.
Sun licks dressing from your lips
this sharp spring wonder.
Sun licks dressing from your lips
Don’t spare me the lemon juice
Don’t blunt your mouth with white lies
Don’t blunt your mouth with white lies
It’s not the lying
That angers me so much as
It’s bald faced nature
That angers me so much as
It’s bald faced nature
Flowers turn their faces
to the fence. A kind of shame.
to the fence. A kind of shame.
Rooting down below
to grasp some dirt-bound essence
required skyward.
to grasp some dirt-bound essence
required skyward.
Tears of sorrow and of joy,
both nourish the thirsty depths.
both nourish the thirsty depths.
Dew upon dew falls,
mist lays down in sheets. Enough
times to rise a flood.
mist lays down in sheets. Enough
times to rise a flood.
the sudden drumming of rain
splatters judgement in this way
splatters judgement in this way
leaves, flowers, trees, none
are excused from nature’s court
all rise for the sun
are excused from nature’s court
all rise for the sun
Bailiff’s gavel summons all;
They answer, save the sleeper.
They answer, save the sleeper.
Sleeping ‘neath the soil
Fruit of judgement starts to heave
Its way into view
Fruit of judgement starts to heave
Its way into view
Brown eye looks up to gold,
Sunflower turns to greet sun.
Sunflower turns to greet sun.
Somewhere, summer has ended.
The bee doesn’t know.
She hums, singing, to the blue.
The bee doesn’t know.
She hums, singing, to the blue.
Passing flower to flower
Seeding the generations
Seeding the generations
Who tunes the bees’ hums?
Who loosens the strings of tides,
rolls thunder like dice?
Who loosens the strings of tides,
rolls thunder like dice?
Lightning wakes the hawk and crow
Reaper and black scavenger
Reaper and black scavenger
7 comments:
Wow, this came together really nice. Glad to be a part of such a dynamic group of writers!
Pretty cool, isn't it, Jacques? I'm glad too!
This is pretty cool! I'd not heard of this form before, and I really like it! Glad to be a part too.
Agreed -- it was such a unique and awesome prompt. I love how it all came together!
First time I ever did one of these, with a wide-open group of participants, that didn't loop off into the ditch in a hurry. Definitely worth doing, and worth doing again someday.
Well, I'm totally up for doing it again, if anyone else is. I am intrigued, however, by looping off into a ditch. That sounds kind of fun...
Catching up on reading... This came out neat! Thanks for the inspiration!
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